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NOTE: i know its long ...you gotta read it though

THE IDEA: 

    The whole idea is for more Young writers to get on with writing...since its the best escape for anyone.....to improve their idea's ......to get honest response and feedback  and to gain the fans heart....yeah the idea may seem absurd and weird...but heck with it...no one has anything to lose....but you see so much more to gain...and even ideas and pointers about your own work...

 THE CAUSE:

     As some of you who know me....i tend to get a lot of writers block....but as a writer when i read any of other work it inspires me to write...even though its short..even though meaningless...you just write...and that is what i want...i want more people to find refuge in writing...more calmness...more justice to their master pieces and that my fellow friends is the cause.

 YOUR REQUESTS and IDEAS:

    This is only for the writers...your request and ideas could be sent to me....to improve the 'Young poets society' and i am all ears...[eyes perhaps in this case]

 PROGRESS:*keeps updating* Tuesday, August 12 '08 [4:16 PM]

    Since all of your 'MASTERRR PIECES' will be added here on this page...and inshalla when i buy the premium each one will have their own page and fan page and all that SHIBAZ! ...People would subscribe to get automatic updates....and you can check out what people really think ...or rather feel about your pieces ...there will be ranking...commenting...to make it easier....

+ Ali's and Joelle's Writings are added...subscribe to receive updates each writer has their own comment box...for you to comment on :)

 THE RULES:

    You didn't think i will let you of this easy...there are rules....common! so try to follow them...please

1. IT SHOULD BE YOUR OWN WRITING...i don't want a copy from somewhere...its just not right...since the whole cause...would lose its cause [poem/essay/thoughts/quotes/lyrics] another page would be dedicated for the stuff you copy...its in the making 

2. When you send your master pieces...you name, age, and location ..should be mentioned

3. All writings should be sent to me ...on email/on facebook ...don't worry it will be posted...but there really isn't any other way to post it here directly and will be checked for spelling/grammar mistakes...  ~common we all aim to perfection right?~

4. [optional] this is for your fans....make a facebook badge and send me the HTML CODE....~to make a Facebook badge...go to your [PROFILE PAGE] and at the bottom there will be a link to make your own badge...and you can just copy and paste the HTML code and send it over....[as i said this is for the fans] OR any way of contacting you...like saaay email xD

Love your fellow writer,

Sara

Name : Joelle Fawaz 

Nickname : Not available for now  

Age : Not yet 17

Location : Abu Dhabi, U.A.E.

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Poem # 1 : A broken heart...

A broken heart is telling the story,
No wonder that it will not be phony.
It is true when I said I love you,
But you told me that it can not be true.
'Friends' was the word that you were looking for
But to me it was nothing more than a word.
You turn me from a hunter to a prey,
But now as we are apart I only pray.
I pray for your love that you have buried,
I pray for the vow when you are married.
I looked around at that time when your within a mile,
I felt warmth due to your charming smile.
To you, I was a friend, a sister but no more like a lover.
For me, you were everything but you made me suffer.
I have always accepted the fact-to-be that we are 'dudes',
But now as you are away it is not according to my mood.
Simple words have separated us
To you probably it was only a fuss
While to me it broke my heart.
After being honest with you,
I have understood the feelings that you have for me
Honestly i was a little taken away.
Now cause of the simple but deep words,
I am going to lose a friend, a brother and once a lover.
I miss the days that we had been once together.
You were the friend that opened my eyes to the world,
You were the gift that God sent to me.
I thank God for it but my happiness was not complete,
As we are apart at the moment.
This is the story of the broken heart,
Whose trying to retrieve the pieces of its own.

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ESSAY # 1: True Happiness 

 Happiness is a feeling that everyone seeks for, a feeling of warmth and light-heartiness that a man would feel from time to time. A feeling without it, we would be left empty and the world will turn ugly. It is the smiles drawn on the faces of little children that keep the world going. Happiness is expressed in different ways by different people. Happiness could be instantaneous or immortal. Instantaneous, as the name says, is only when we are happy in that precise moment. On the other hand, immortal happiness is the happiness that lasts forever as long as the memory is retained. True happiness is something that is not given but achieved through hard work, i.e., it is not achieved by doing something simple and being rewarded after that.

Happiness through man’s life is experienced in different ways.
There are several examples that a man would feel this happiness and it would be through marriage, friendship, health, freedom, success and the list goes on…
As a child, happiness is vague and as an adult, happiness is a goal.
Unlike childhood, adulthood is a stage full of contradictions and responsibilities that are able to make you go insane! So the only cure is to establish happiness throughout the hard beneficial work.
I have spoken a lot about true happiness and its meaning, yet I didn’t open the topic of its examples, so here we go…

Happiness in starters is all about success in studies and having the certificate from university, why is it developed? For a simple reason which is the accomplishment in the first stage of life. That person will always feel that he is someone in this life and so will have a kind of pride and understanding nature; therefore first-stage happiness is accomplished. After graduation, comes the work where you stay for continuous hours working to get the reward that you hoped for. Oh! What will you do if you were rewarded to a higher rank? If it is up to me, I will shout with the tip of my voice to release the adrenaline effect from my body; in other words, I will be the happiest person ever lived till now…

After working, usually comes engagement and marriage and these two usually influence the person’s life. A smooth marriage to someone, whom you respect and adore, is everyone’s dream as most of the problems that arose are because of this sacred joining. To wake up everyday next to a person who you vowed to spend your life with and not feeling gratitude for their presence, is an enormous problem that will lead to depression, the opposite of happiness. That is why it is advisable to take your time to think carefully about the huge step they are performing. On the other hand, a partner in your life is necessary, as it will let you know that there is someone out there who waits for you to come back form work. A partner that will cry when you cry, smile when you smile, hold your hand when you are in pain and tell you that everything is going to be fine. A partner who you can trust your secrets with, and who is the mother/father of your children. Isn’t it nice to have someone like that in our life? The idea makes you smile so what do you think of the actual thing? All these once found, the second stage of happiness can be reached. Kids are also important contribution to happiness. Mom/Dad is a magical word that we don’t want to deprive ourselves from. So, healthy kids who perform well in their schools and life and have no social problem, are a blessing that every parent wish for their children. The third stage is reached.

Health is a major role that contributes to the mentality of a person. A sick person won’t be able to know happiness as all his time would be spent between hospitals, and they will wish to have a healthy life instead of a wealthy one. A lot of kings are not happy in their lives even with all the money they can’t handle and all the wives they could marry as well as many children to call them dad; they are ill and they can’t eat what they wish or want. Instead at such times, they prefer to be peasants and have a normal life to eat what they wish for. Money is not everything; it is only a small factor that allows sustaining ourselves. Therefore, when you are healthy and appreciates the life around you, you also reached another stage of happiness.

Nevertheless, all stages of happiness can’t be reached as we all know that God opens a door and closes another. Yet, you don’t need to worry my friend as your place will be reserved in heaven if you did the right thing in life, of course by God’s will not mine! We all wish to have a healthy and wealthy life which is difficult nowadays but that doesn’t mean that we can’t accomplish it. The key point to happiness is satisfaction and appreciation to well-being and life. So I wish you my friend such a life and have a good day.

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My THOUGHTS # 1 : My Love

    No one can go back in time and love you the same love I loved you before. My love was true enough to trap any other but it has chosen you from all the others.
My love was real enough to make me think of you anytime and anywhere. Dreaming of you made me dream of a heaven full of angels and enriched by the feelings that I had for you. My love was a gift that was brought form heaven in order to love you like I have never loved before.

    This love that I had for you can never be measured by words or actions. My love is beyond that. My love is greater than anything great in this vast world. This love has been improved by millions so by now I don’t know from where to begin the description of it. Lost in a world of illusions where mysteries lay about this love. Afraid of what is going to occur due to such feeling, indescribable indeed!
Words are made of letters but my love consists of my heart along with the feelings that make it pump. My soul is telling you to stay as it can’t live without its other half. It started to develop the needy feeling for you. “Please, don’t leave!” my soul is shouting…
Love can never be defined as it is beyond the limit of our understanding. This is the kind of love that I have for you.

Name : Diamond Almas

Nickname : ermm 'Diamondaayaah' :P 

Age :  15

Location : Abu Dhabi, U.A.E.

~going for the whole 'Twilight' Theme here~ 

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Poem # 1 : Shackled...

Watching him decide between whats right and wrong,
kills me each day but he says for me to stay strong.

'Cause i cant live without the endless need for poison in my veins,
that forces me into his life like I'm shackled by chains.

Like the cuts i made for myself day by day,
and the bruises he gave me himself yesterday.

'Cause he couldn’t take it anymore;
still he stays with me like before,
unlike the people I used to adore.

But somethings never seem to change,
I try to understand but karma is strange.

No matter what , he always stays the same
never knowing that his worries equals my name

My broken tortured heart is here for him to take,
not to try and mend it like he does for my sake.

Why cant he just let me be?
Why cant he possibly see?

That I'm the reason for his pain,
the reason behind the shame,
& yet he is talking the blame.

Drugs , cuts and scars are all I will ever be good for.
So why isn't it tempting for him to just walk out the door?

But yet again he chose me,

chooses wrong so I can stay strong.

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Poem # 2 : Your Minds Evolution..

Image your life as a series of unfortunate events                                                         From birth your life has been full of sadness and regrets                                       Imagine finding yourself isolated and lost because of your secrets

Imagine suddenly your life is finally starting to feel right
Feeling the world is full of opportunities and oh so bright
Then it all flashes and burns to ashes and fades from your sight
Then u think you should have seen what was really there and not some holy light
And you should have known not to give up your dreams for reality without a fight

Just because some people don’t seem to know or care what their heart is for
Doesn’t mean you should stop just because they are not human anymore
No one can un-write what has been written and make things like before
Just remember to think about the people you love and adore
The memory will guide you and will make you fight even more

Then soon you’ll find your dreams for reality isn’t just an illusion
Because they have never been and never was only a delusion
In fact your mind was just waiting for a spiritual evolution
Waiting for your heart to stop focusing on the confusion
And the reward for all the hard work and devotion
Is a new era of your life with a solid solution
A life with a positive infusion <3

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